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Monday, 18 April 2016

O - Oblivion of life

You are a poem
Hazy and vague to discern
Show me who you are.

Panting from running
In endless circles, I am
Turn my life around!

Gods must be laughing
A fool in his plans, I am
Jolly laughing stock.

I am waiting for
The spring in my barren land
Come, be my first bloom!

Written for Haiku Horizons: "poem"
Written for A to Z April Challenge, 2016.


ArchanaC Kapoor said...

aha... this was like a breath of fresh air buddy... beautiful!!!

Srivi said...

Wow! That's beautifully penned :)

The Piscean Me

Liv bySurprise said...

People are as intricate and complicated as poems can be - great analogy!

Sun Bloom said...

@ArchanaC Kapoor
Haha, thanks a lot. It meant so much to me. :)

Sun Bloom said...

Thank you! :)

Sun Bloom said...

@Liv bySurprise
Yes, surely, thank you for stopping by!

Milan Rajkumar said...

O what a beautiful cascade ! I adore the last one !

Sun Bloom said...

@Milan Rajkumar
Thank you!