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Thursday, 14 April 2016

L - Lust

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Every nerve in his body
Went through a surge
Of frenzy intoxication
Allowing himself to indulge.

A simple camaraderie
Turned into silly small talks
Soon he found himself bury
In her lustful arms.

It was a sin, he knew
She belonged to no one.
As her lips kissed his sinew
Knowing every one belonged to her.

A lustful gesture that tempted
Him to go feral and beastly
The prostitute patiently waited
Until lust lured another customer.

Written for A to Z April Challenge, 2016.
Written for The Tuesday Platform

10 comments:

De said...

This is deeply sad. There's such a loneliness in the last stanza, for both of them.

Mama Zen said...

That last stanza does give this an expected turn. It is sad.

dysfunctionalmind said...

Wow! Absolutely marvellous!
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ozzypip said...

poem. I agree withthe comments above that the last stanza is particularly powerful. All the best with the rest of the A to Z challenge

C.C. said...

The emptiness at the end pours out and reframes the rest of the piece differently than one initially imagined it at the start.

Sun Bloom said...

@De
Yes, there is.

Sun Bloom said...

@Mama Zen
I intended the turn. Thank you!

Sun Bloom said...

@dysfunctionalmind
Thank you!

Sun Bloom said...

@ozzypip
Sure, thanks.

Sun Bloom said...

@ C.C.
Yes, I intended the turn. Thanks!