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Monday, 7 September 2015

Float

His own life floated
In front of the dying man
The bullet pierced him.

Written for Haiku Horizons: "float"

12 comments:

Archana Kapoor said...

piercing!!! nicely done buddy... sharing it :-)

Reading Pleasure said...

How tragic!

Kathy Combs said...

You have achieved the wow factor with this one...A complete story within the confines of a haiku. Brilliant!

Sun Bloom said...

@Archana Kapoor. Thank you, as always!

Sun Bloom said...

@Reading Pleasure. :)

Sun Bloom said...

@Kathy Combs. Thank you very much.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Thud!

On a Parade Float

Sun Bloom said...

@Magical Mystical Teacher. :-)

Loco mente said...

Heartfelt!

Sun Bloom said...

@Locomente. Thank you. :)

Kalpana Solsi said...

A small complete story (tragedy)in a haiku. Brilliant.

http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

Sun Bloom said...

@Kalpana Solsi. Thank you!