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Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Retreat

I love you
More than my life
Do you see it?

Do you see it?
Or choose not to?
Or is it too blinding?

Or is it too blinding?
That you turn your back
And walk away

And walk away
Towards oblivion
But where do I go?

But where do I go?
My life began with you
And you are my retreat.

Written for Haiku Horizons: Retreat

7 comments:

Reshma said...

Deep thoughts, is it the self/conscience you are referring to? Nicely done

Sun Bloom said...

I wrote it with a man and a woman in mind. :) But, am glad your thoughts are deeper than mine. I read my poem again, after reading your comment and realized the other face of the coin. :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The retreat, however, seems unmoved...

Afternoon Retreat

Sun Bloom said...

@Magical

Such is the story. :)

rajkumarmilan said...

so unique ! what a style ! simply great !

Sun Bloom said...

Thanks. :)

rajkumarmilan said...

hope you will like my retreat too ...
http://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2014/06/06/retreat/