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Monday, 21 July 2014

Crowd



Bright and sunny, the day was good
Crowd and chaos in the fruits' market
Meek and afraid, the little girl stood
Going to the market, she would regret.

Oranges, grapefruits and marred boards
Some just visible, some not legible
Monotonous talks, she would get bored
"Papa, let's go," her voice would be feeble.

Still avoiding those messy markets
Today she is grown-up and fine
"So much shopping to do", her mother frets
She replies, "Whatever you want, just order online."

Written for Magpie Tales: Mag 229

12 comments:

Berowne said...

Sharp and clever post; well done.

Kelly Del Valle said...

Hehe, the opposite of me! I adore farmer's markets!

Nice rhymes. :D

Kelly Del Valle @
www.kellydelvalle.net/poetry

Sun Bloom said...

Berowne, as always, thank you. :)


Kelly, oh really? I hate crowds.
Thanks. :)

Mama Zen said...

This cracked me up!

Other Mary said...

Lol, problem solved!

Kathe W. said...

sorry- no food online- I must touch and smell!

Eddie Bluelights said...

. . . and free delivery no doubt!

Last line made it and cracked me up . . . ~ Eddie :)

Clouds and Silvery Linings

Sun Bloom said...

Haha, thanks everyone!

Kutamun said...

Of course ! It is a web- site; well done

Sun Bloom said...

Haha, thanks.

Carrie Van Horn said...

That is one way to avoid the crowds for sure. Love this! :-)

Sun Bloom said...

Right! Thanks!