I love you
More than my life
Do you see it?
Do you see it?
Or choose not to?
Or is it too blinding?
Or is it too blinding?
That you turn your back
And walk away
And walk away
Towards oblivion
But where do I go?
But where do I go?
My life began with you
And you are my retreat.
Written for Haiku Horizons: Retreat
More than my life
Do you see it?
Do you see it?
Or choose not to?
Or is it too blinding?
Or is it too blinding?
That you turn your back
And walk away
And walk away
Towards oblivion
But where do I go?
But where do I go?
My life began with you
And you are my retreat.
Written for Haiku Horizons: Retreat
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7 comments:
Deep thoughts, is it the self/conscience you are referring to? Nicely done
I wrote it with a man and a woman in mind. :) But, am glad your thoughts are deeper than mine. I read my poem again, after reading your comment and realized the other face of the coin. :)
The retreat, however, seems unmoved...
Afternoon Retreat
@Magical
Such is the story. :)
so unique ! what a style ! simply great !
Thanks. :)
hope you will like my retreat too ...
http://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2014/06/06/retreat/
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