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Tuesday, 17 May 2016

Moon-struck

Behold her in the dusk!
She caresses the breeze,
By her uncanny resemblance
To an angel, I am awe-struck!

As her free flowing hair
Throng her face of golden-glow,
I see her beauty only half;
The other half in moonlight.

 Written for The Tuesday Platform

6 comments:

  1. brudberg17 May 2016 at 20:56

    I think I need to go out and howl a little :-)

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  2. Stacie Eirich17 May 2016 at 22:29

    Awww..you had me before your beautiful words began, with the picture of Ariel looking up at the moonlight, sitting on her rock, dreaming of the land with the sea so close below. Thanks for sharing!

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  3. Hannah18 May 2016 at 00:42

    I love that silhouetted effect in your poem...nicely captured. :)

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  4. Susie Clevenger18 May 2016 at 04:57

    Oh wow..this is beautifully romantic

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  5. Angie19 May 2016 at 01:38

    I like how she caresses the breeze! Not the other way around

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  6. Sunshine-struck23 May 2016 at 07:57

    @brudberg
    ;)

    @Stacie Eirich
    Aaahww! Thank you!

    @Hannah
    Thanks!

    @Susie Clevenger
    Thank you!

    @angieinspired
    Yes, not the other way around. ;) Thank you!

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