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Monday, 3 August 2015

Window

The child took a peek
The window showed a stranger
Who was soon shut out.

Written for Haiku Horizons: "window"

8 comments:

  1. Reading Pleasure3 August 2015 at 15:37

    Intriguing!

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  2. rallentanda5 August 2015 at 20:45

    Peeping Tom ?

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  3. Milan Rajkumar6 August 2015 at 00:48

    That's a mystery haiku ,well penned !

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  4. Unknown6 August 2015 at 18:44

    amazing :-)

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  5. Bastet's Waka Library7 August 2015 at 10:20

    An interesting image ... and profoundly true of adults as well.

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  6. Magical Mystical Teacher7 August 2015 at 18:08

    Shutting out strangers seems to be a common theme in our world...

    Window

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  7. Alice10 August 2015 at 05:30

    I like the narrative quality of this poem.
    Alice

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  8. Sunshine-struck10 August 2015 at 16:30

    @rallentanda
    Maybe.

    @Milan Rajkumar
    Thank you!

    @Archana Kapoor
    Thanks!

    @Georgia Koch
    Yes. Thanks for reading!

    @Magical Mystical Teacher
    True. Sometimes, necessary.

    @Alice
    Thanks, Alice!

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