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Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Retreat

I love you
More than my life
Do you see it?

Do you see it?
Or choose not to?
Or is it too blinding?

Or is it too blinding?
That you turn your back
And walk away

And walk away
Towards oblivion
But where do I go?

But where do I go?
My life began with you
And you are my retreat.

Written for Haiku Horizons: Retreat

7 comments:

  1. Reshma6 June 2014 at 05:34

    Deep thoughts, is it the self/conscience you are referring to? Nicely done

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  2. Sunshine-struck6 June 2014 at 20:51

    I wrote it with a man and a woman in mind. :) But, am glad your thoughts are deeper than mine. I read my poem again, after reading your comment and realized the other face of the coin. :)

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  3. Magical Mystical Teacher7 June 2014 at 03:52

    The retreat, however, seems unmoved...

    Afternoon Retreat

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  4. Sunshine-struck7 June 2014 at 18:23

    @Magical

    Such is the story. :)

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  5. Anonymous7 June 2014 at 23:28

    so unique ! what a style ! simply great !

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  6. Sunshine-struck8 June 2014 at 14:11

    Thanks. :)

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  7. Anonymous8 June 2014 at 17:59

    hope you will like my retreat too ...
    http://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2014/06/06/retreat/

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